ಜುಲೈ 15, 2025

Hope on the Ceiling - Includes Both Versions by Me and ChatGPT

_Inspired by a real news story and a moment from Man of Steel — where a family paints Superman’s “S” on the ceiling, hoping he’ll come. This is about real-life heroes, hope, and a cat named Luna._


It rained day
And night
And our homes
Carried away
By the river
Like it was a matchbox

We ran for our lives
We found a shelter uptown
We lost all hopes
And our dream home
Is now shattered

Someone gave me blanket
Someone gave me hot soup
I'm thankful for all the
Things we received
It's the blessing in disguise

We will start again
And we have not lost hope
I wrote this and cried
And cat luna came and
Sat on me and started
Purring like a tesla
Damn luna, you're 80cc car
Actually like it

I smiled
Luna purred
And I started serving
Breakfast to the
Rest of the people


And I gave the same content to ChatGPT and here's take on the poem:
It rained
Day and night,
And our homes
Were carried away
By the river —
Like they were matchboxes.

We ran for our lives.
We found a shelter uptown.
We lost all hope,
And our dream home
Is now shattered.

Someone gave me a blanket.
Someone gave me hot soup.
I'm thankful for all the
Things we received —
A blessing in disguise.

We will start again.
We have not lost hope.
I wrote this and cried…
And cat Luna came,
Sat on me, and started
Purring like a Tesla.

Damn, Luna — you're an 80cc car.
Actually, I like it.

I smiled.
Luna purred.
And I started serving
Breakfast to the
Rest of the people.

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